Writing Loglines Can Help Keep Your Story On Track


Sometimes when I read stories submitted to the “Friend”, there can be a distinct lack of clarity regarding what a story is about.

The writer may have created an engaging main character, but if that character aimlessly ambles around, lacking narrative direction, then the reader will quickly switch off.

It is therefore incredibly important to give your main character something to strive for, or a situation to overcome.

When talking to writers, I often use the term “motivation to succeed”. This means giving your character story goals, and creating obstacles standing in their way.

It’s still easy, though, for writers to lose their thread when it comes to the actual story writing.

This is where the use of a logline can come in handy.

A logline is simply a one-sentence summary of what a story is about, highlighting the protagonist, the protagonist’s goal, and the adversary or hostile force he or she is facing.

One-sentence Summary

 Here are two examples of famous loglines:

A girl (protagonist Dorothy) finds herself transported to a magical land – but before she can return home (story goal) she must battle an evil witch (adversary).

The Wizard Of Oz

Against the backdrop of the American Civil War (antagonistic force), a spoiled Southern Belle (protagonist Scarlett) has to adapt to survive (story goal).

Gone With The Wind

So, next time you are thinking of writing a short story, serial or novel, see if you can sum it up in one sentence.

All you need to remember are three key elements: protagonist, story goal and adversary/obstacle to overcome.

It can be quite a challenge to write loglines. But summing up a story in one line really does encourage effective, focused storytelling.

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Alan Spink

Alan is a member of the “Friend” Fiction Team. He enjoys working closely with writers and being part of the creative process, which sees storytelling ideas come to fruition. A keen reader, he also writes fiction and enjoys watching football and movies in his spare time. His one tip to new writers is “write from your imagination”.