I thought it would be beneficial to list some common writing mistakes we see in story submissions to the “Friend”.
“Show, don’t tell”
The old fiction adage is important as it lets characters express themselves. It also helps the reader feel more part of the story. New writers have a habit of telling readers what’s happening, rather than letting this naturally unfold through the characters.
Telling: He was afraid as the figure approached.
Showing: His heartbeat quickened at the sound of the heavy footsteps.
Telling: It was love, of that she was sure. But did he feel the same way?
Showing: Their hands touched and she felt a shiver of excitement. “I want us to run away tonight,” he said.
Strange as it seems, we receive lots of stories featuring unpleasant characters.
Characters don’t have to be perfect, but they should still possess positive, admirable traits. Think of your characters as people the readers would happily invite into their homes; people they can relate to and trust.
By all means, give your characters a flaw or two – but always highlight their redeeming qualities, too.
Storylines shouldn’t offend or disappoint, either. It’s not a perfect world, but the reader wants escapism, where the word “hope” is prevalent.
Pacing the plot
The plot of a story has to go somewhere. It has to contain scenes that help build character motivation.
I know when a plot isn’t the strongest when my mind begins to wander. I liken this to a wandering storyline, where the protagonist is ambling aimlessly through the course of the story.
A story doesn’t have to contain lavish settings or action-packed scenes to become a good read.
But there should be a connection of events that piques reader interest throughout.
Introduce character goals sooner rather than later, and then introduce complications into the mix. Use conflict to raise tension, culminating in a satisfying ending.
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